This week’s 100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups was to mark St George’s Day and the anniversary of Shakespeare’s birth with a sonnet. Both would turn in their graves, I suspect, to read my offering. (Rhymist I may be, poet I ain’t.) 😦
Her knight in shining armour
arrived much later than expected
(her hormones were much calmer –
minimal oestrogen detected).
Not for them the ups and downs
of unrequited passion,
the pair of them had done the rounds
each in their own sweet fashion;
but still the dragon had his way
and swiftly reared his head,
that green eyed monster ruled the day,
they’ve parted now, it’s said.
None did their work as well as he
they foundered over jealousy.
Brilliant! It really was a tough one this week – thought you rose to the challenge extremely well. I love the fact that your dragon was a metaphorical one.
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It was tough, I almost decided not to bother. Metaphor was the only way I could approach it. Thanks for commenting.
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Yes, really like how you interpreted this . Worked brilliantly :O)
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Thanks Anna, glad you liked it.
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This is really wonderful. Sonnets (or poems of any form) can truly tell so much.
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Thanks for commenting Lisa – it was a difficult one this week wasn’t it
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Loved it!
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Thanks for reading and commenting Sheila.
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Great job, I certainly couldn’t do it. Do sonnets have rules? I haven’t even tried this week’s challenge because I just don’t know how. This one is delightful, green eyed monster, indeed. 😉
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The only rules I followed Judee were the 14 lines and the abab,cdcd,efef,gg rhyming pattern. If I’d taken any account of the number of syllables in lines I think my effort would have been strangled at birth. Thanks for reading and commenting – I agree it was a hard one this week.
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And we haven’t all got Shakespear’s time either. Everything moves a lot faster these days. Casting jealousy as the dragon was clever and means he’s harder to defeat.
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Thank you!
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This is fantastic .. well done, I really enjoyed reading this one 🙂
Andrea
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Very clever! I went for the funny bone I’m afraid, and lost the ‘sonnet’ style I think, but I love this, very original.
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Thanks for dropping by and commenting.
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Love your poem, and I too like the idea of the dragon being the green eyed monster! It works really well!
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Thank you! Glad it worked for you.
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Thought I’d just left a comment, but obviously not – sorry if you end up with two, rather similar ones! I love your poem, and I too love the concept of the dragon as the green eyed monster. It works really well! Good job!
(I have to use this name to comment, as WordPress don’t generally recognise Blogspot!)
Writing from the Edge
http://lorely-writingfromtheedge.blogspot.com/2012/04/sonnets-for-saints-and-scribes.html
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I like how they met later in life (when her homones were calmer!) Clever way to go.
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It was a struggle this week. Glad you liked it.
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For someone who was going to let this one go, you have a real talent for those rhyming couplet thingys! This is so good and is a piece to be proud of! move over Will, here comes Sandra!
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Too kind! 🙂 Glad you enjoyed it.
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Lovely. Well done!
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Thank you Miriam. 🙂
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