I looked at the photo prompt and just saw ‘plane tree’. I make no apologies for not being inspired by the bike! 🙂
Apologies to all who may not have been able to find my comments last week. The problem is, I believe, sorted. 😉
Her dilapidated lock-side cottage had been shock enough, but the cracked bare banks of the Midi stunned me into silence.
Gone were the colonnades of plane trees, dappling the banks with their restless leafy cover. Now ugly steel pilings stood where once gnarled, knotted roots had supported the canal as it wound towards the sea.
“Chancre coloré” said grandmère, “wiped them out from here to Carcassonne.”
In the distance workmen toiled under the blazing sun, leaving a trail of puny upright saplings.
“A new strain; they say it’s resistant.”
“Ugly though,” I said.
Grandmère grinned toothlessly.
“Not everything that is young is beautiful, ma chère. Some things take time.”
It’s estimated that 42,000 plane trees lining the Midi will be destroyed by this fungal disease which originally entered Europe from munitions boxes unloaded at Marseille during the second world war.
Dear Sandra,
And not everything that’s beautiful is young. Well crafted story. Never apologize for not being inspired by the most prominent thing in a prompt. I applaud your creativity and imagination. Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle. I appreciate your dropping by.
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There is, indeed, a time for everything.
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True. 🙂
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That’s a beautiful last line. It will stay with me for a long time, I think. 🙂
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Thanks David!
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Simply haunting, and very true. Reminds me a bit of Tolkien: “The old that is strong does not wither, deep roots are not reached by frost.”
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Lovely quote, thank you.
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I do love plane trees, but beech are my favourite.
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My particular favourite are horse-chestnuts. Thanks for reading.
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I love the look and history of old trees. With age comes beauty. 🙂 The original is always more appreciated than the substitute or copy.
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Thanks for commenting Joyce. 🙂
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I hat to see large trees destroyed either by progress or disease. It takes so long for some trees to mature and the face that we consciously destroy otherwise healthy trees seems so wasteful.
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I know what you mean. When we moved to our present house we had a row of eucalyptus trees spaced less than three feet apart. We’ve had experience of them in South Africa and in the UK so they had to go, but it was very upsetting at the time.
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trees suffer from society
beauty takes time – doesn’t it? thanks for the reminder
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Thanks for reading moondustwriter. 🙂
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Interesting take on it. Seeing just the tree and the blight of urban sprawl. Love it!
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Thank you! glad you liked it.
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An inspired metaphor! I love that you put in the French. I could really picture the setting (and almost hear the accordions!). 😀
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Thanks Linda, glad you liked it.
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Ah bon. Vous parlez Franglais! Tres good.
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I can murder French, Spanish and German. I occasionally wreak a bit of ‘grievous bodily harm’ on English too! 🙂
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a beautiful lesson in this story. i really love the last line..
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Thanks kz. Loved yours this week.
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A wonderful lesson for us all to keep in mind.
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I wish some hire-boaters on the Midi would keep it in mind. They spread the infection by tying mooring ropes to trees. Thanks for reading.
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How sad about the trees! I hate the demise of trees whether through disease or “progress”. And as someone who is taking time, I appreciate your last line. 🙂
janet
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Yes, it’s very sad.The entire face of the Midi is changing. 😦 As is mine 🙂
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A lovely moral to this story, very tenderly told.
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Thanks Claire! 🙂
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Hi Sandra,
Really good story, in so many ways. How the loss of beautiful trees saddens us. But you give us hope for the future. The wisdom of the old woman is another fine element. Impressed that you can recognize a plane tree from its bark. We don’t have plane trees here, but we do have its relative, the sycamore, and tall sycamores grow just down the hill from where we live. Thanks for the botanical lesson. Ron
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Thanks Ron. Just as a matter of interest, the wooden boxes that brought the disease into Marseille during WW2 contained munitions from USA. But the cultivar that has proved to be resistant to chancre colore also comes from the States. 🙂 How’s that for coincidence?
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Being in France too I have heard about this problem. You have used it in a very subtle manner; well-done!
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Hi Gabriella, you’ll have seen the impact that it’s had on the countryside then. Such a shame, glad you liked the story though.
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Sad to read the plight of the plane trees, but glad there is a new cultivar that is disease resistant. Good story, Sandra.
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Hi vb, help is on the way. And from the USA. It will just take a long time to rectify. Thanks for commenting.
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Sandra I really enjoyed this piece. Tree’s have a special place in my heart. So to me, your story was wonderful. And the information you shared afterwards, sadly true. Penny
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Hi Penny, glad you enjoyed it. I share your love of trees – if my husband didn’t restrain me I’d have more than just the apple tree I’m allowed in our garden. 🙂
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Topical story. Loved it. Enjoy being informed. In RSA we have tiny ants that destroy trees. They’re resistant to chemicals.
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Are they the so called ‘crazy ants’? If so I believe that they are resistant to the pesticides for fire ants. Good basis for a story there… Thanks for commenting.
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I hope you don’t get tired of hearing this, darling, but that last line is pure gold.
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Thank you Helena! 🙂
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I liked the lesson in this one – and it is so true – beauty can take time to appear. A flash packed with information!
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Thank you, glad you liked it.
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This piece really speaks to me; as a person who has wasted so much time in the past, the message is very uplifting! Your words are an inspiration 🙂
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I’m not sure I’ve ever inspired anyone before… 🙂 Thank you!
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I’ll bet you have and didn’t even know it 😉
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I do like it. Grandmere is very wise!
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Thanks Freya!
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Great story, Sandra, especially the last line. and an interesting history lesson too. thank you. All the elms around us are dying from a disease and in the UK they are facing Ash die-Back. It’s a sad time for trees.
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We’ve got the Ash Die-Back in the UK too. Such a shame. Thanks for reading Jen.
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Ah, sweet story, yes!
Here in Kansas, we lost some maple trees due to the drought of last year. They’re trying like crazy to remove them. Sad. 😦
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Thank you Kent. Sorry to hear about the maples.
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Very original and timely take on the photo. I liked it!
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Thanks! 🙂
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“And not everything that’s beautiful is young” Interesting and contrarian thought all right and comforting to a geezer like me. Thanks, Sandra!.
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I thought you’d like that Perry!
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I’m on board with so many others regarding the last line – a good bit of wisdom to hang onto. =)
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Thank you Troy.
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Hopefully these new saplings are the “ugly ducklings” of the tree world!
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Yes, I was reflecting on swans as well!
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loved the story and the information.
More than a hundred thousand trees were recently cut in my birth place (Lucknow, India) for building meaningless memorials.
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Such a dreadful shame about your birthplace. Thanks for dropping by.
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“Youth is wasted on the young.” Oscar Wilde? I like your old crone-type and her old crone wisdom. And of course, it’s a real tragedy. I care enough about trees to be a member of the Woodland Trust and the latest tree disease here is heartbreaking.
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George Bernard Shaw, I think. But they had similar observational styles, I always thought. Good for you, supporting Woodland Trust. I must look that organisation up. Is there anything sadder than a sick tree?
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Loved the grandmother’s line. We seldom know what we’ll reap when we sow the seeds of war. A lovely story with a deeper message.
Here’s mine: http://unexpectedpaths.com/friday-fictioneers/band-of-brothers/
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Thanks Maggie. I loved your response to this prompt.
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Interesting little French Tale. I never heard of a Plane Tree until I moved to Bath. They are huge and startlingly old. The one in front of our house is way over 200 years. It would be horrible if anything happened to it…
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They’ve just planted a long line of plane trees on the street where I live. I’m not sure they realised how big they grow… Thanks for dropping by.
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Enjoyable…and true!
Scott
Mine: http://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2013/07/18/5078/
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Thanks Scott!
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You are so welcome!
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Very nicely done as usual. I have heard of Plane trees but have never seen one except in pictures. Beautiful trees as most are. I love the Willow myself. So mysterious. Sad about the Plane trees though. Even after so many years past the war, the devastation lingers.
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It’s been very sad watching the disease take hold. And then we return to a place to find it bereft of shade, the banks now reinforced by man and not by nature. Thanks for commenting.
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Sandra, I’ve missed reading your work. It’s been awhile (Trifecta). Decided to branch out a bit and try Friday Fictioneers. Glad I did. This is great. I love that last line. Just perfect.
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Hi Steph, good to see you over here. Yes I’ve not done Trifecta for a while. Don’t quite know why. Maybe too time-consuming, now that Friday Fictioneers, where I’ve contributed for a couple of years or more is regularly pulling in 80+ submissions each week. Thanks for commenting. See you next time hopefully.
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The older I get, the more I can relate to that grandma.
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I can echo those sentiments. Thanks for dropping by.
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Very nice unique take on the prompt, and so true that youth does not equal beauty.
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Glad you agree. Thanks for coming by.
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I loved this one. Great wisdom in her words.
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Thanks Erin, hope all is well with you
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Hi Sandra
Wonderful last line and I loved Grandmere’s toothless grin. I love your lateral thinking.
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What a great piece Sandra. The end rings so much true… Here in Stockholm they have to remove all the old elm trees because of a similar disease.. and indeed it takes years upon years to reaplace
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Great work. I liked the tribute too. Who knows what will speak to us in a photo? That’s what is so fun about reading these – seeing other people’s take on the photo. Well, and admiring their skill.
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AnElephant also adores trees.
And your story.
Superb!
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Loved this post.
Also wanted to say, I am using your old image that was in April again, I am linking it to you again as owner of the image
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Your closing line is absolutely beautiful. Well done, Sandra!
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I loved this one Sandra, one of your best I think – the last line is brilliant.
Sorry this comment is so late – I have had huge problems trying to post any comments over the weekend.
Dee
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Thank you Dee, sorry about your problems. My situation is resolved now, thank goodness. You could raise your issue on the WordPress support forums and someone might be able to help.
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Over the past few years, we’ve had a problem with borers wiping out our red oak trees. Thankfully, they don’t attack white oak or post oak, but still they’ve had a devastating effect on the acorn crop that so much of our wildlife depends upon to make it through the winter.
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a great story, well inter twined with reality.. my fav kinda stories 🙂
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