“Can you pull me up, Dwight? I can’t seem to get over this ledge.”
“Shhh, Ruby, they’ll hear ya.”
“I thought you said this place closed down.”
“Well there’s folks in there now, new owners maybe.”
“What do they look like?”
“Whadd’ya mean, look like? Like humans, you know, arms, legs, faces, all that stuff.”
“I mean do they look …well.. er … “
“What?”
“Liberal-minded, I guess.”
“How’d I know? What’s liberal-minded look like? What’s eatin’ ya Ruby.”
“Well you know, not everyone approves of lunars and crecopias mixing and all that.”
“Shoot Ruby, just get yo’ furry ass up here and see for yo’self.”
Rochelle has posted one of her favourite stories for this week’s Friday Fictioneers re-tread. And coincidentally, although this was quite a difficult prompt, this re-tread was one of my favourites too. (The accent was modelled on Reginald D Hunter – an American comedian very popular in the UK. The lady moth is English, through and through.) Glad to see that Rochelle is feeling better, and recovering in the company of her family.
Very funny.
Or should that be furry?
Really, Sandra!
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Thanks CE, glad you liked it. 🙂
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Loved the dialogue in this. Can only apologies that mine treads, or flutters above, such similar territory.
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Thank you. Great minds…?
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Garcon, there’s an antenna in my dressing..
Shit we must have manhandled one of our other customers.
Love the dialogue here.
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🙂 Thanks Bjorn.
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Most amusing Sandra: well done.
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Thanks Mick. Nice to have a day off.
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Love this – flows really naturally. There’s already a lot of dialogue this week (me included!) – similar minds again!
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I imagined there would be plenty of dialogue. 🙂 Thanks for visiting.
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Dear Sandra,
Sometimes it’s nice to kick back and go with a golden oldie, isn’t it? Yours is most certainly golden.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Hi Rochelle, yes, it was nice to kick back for once. And thank you.
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Hilarious, Sandra. Great dialogue. I never knew there was discrimination in the butterfly/moth world. We live and learn. 😀 — Suzanne
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Maybe Ruby’s just a tad sensitive… 🙂 Thanks for reading Suzanne.
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Fabulous….
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Thank you!
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This was such a funny read, excellent work!
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Thank you, glad you liked it.
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It made me giggle…”Hurry up!”
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Thanks for visiting. 🙂
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I read everything you write. I promise.
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Funny! I laughed!
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Than you!
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I’m glad you recycled this cute story or I would have never read it and I like it.
T
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Thanks Tracey 🙂
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Very funny, I love it.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Oh wow…this was kinda lie mine..kinda sorta.
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Fun dialogue and I’ve learnt something new. (Do they get admitted, I wonder.)
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Thanks Patrick. I should think so, they look ‘armless enough.
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Dwight and Ruby. I’m lovin’ it. Thanks for the laugh (and the lesson) Sandra.
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Thanks for reading Honie. 🙂
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Lol. That’s 2 weeks without a murder, Sandra. I smell blood.
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I know… My murderous lust must be diminishing.
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Hi Sandra.Very funny, loved it.
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Thanks Indira. Hope all is well with you.
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Yes dear. At this age have to be prepared for some health issues.
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I almost wrote a moth story – my daughter has Death’s Head Moth caterpillars eating her plants every year. This story made me smile – lovely.
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Thanks Liz. 🙂
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Great dialogue! I thought of an inter-racial relationship, too. You handled it much better than I would have.
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Nah! Enjoyed yours.
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Careful, Ruby and Dwight. Those humans may just push some pins through your wings and keep you behind some glass!
Can’t always trust humans, liberal or not.
Good one!
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Very true. Thanks for visiting JK.
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Love this! Quite a cute story!
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Thanks Miles.
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Love the description of us humans. Love the dialogue 🙂
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Glad you liked it 🙂
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Great dialogue, well written as usual.
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Thanks Perry.
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From the butterfly viewpoint 😀 love it!
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Thank you!
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Great dialogue and nicely subtle message about discrimination.
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Thanks a lot, Draliman. 🙂
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This is great – loved it.
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Thanks Sally. 🙂
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Loved it.
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Thanks for dropping by. 🙂
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You’ve done it again! I couldn’t come up with a decent story given that photo as muse and not only did you, you made me smile too. Good job, Sandra.
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Ah! Glad you’re back Barbara. Must pop along to your site and see what you’ve been up to. Thanks for reading. 🙂
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Great dialogue Sandra.
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Thanks Mike.
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Ha! Hilarious. What does a Liberal look like? I think they have a little “L” emblazed in their forehead. The last line will stay with me for a looonnnggg time.
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🙂 Best place for it. Oh wait… maybe the second best. 🙂
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Very funny, really cute. Loved it!
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Thanks Yolanda.
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Cute conversation
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Thank you!
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Sadly I know many humans who would squash them both just for being moths period.
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Love this dialogue! Very well done, very funny!
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Great dialogue. I love the POV and the need for liberal-minded folk. Nice one!
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It took me awhile to realise it was the moths talking. Very funny. Great dialogue.
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Furry posteriors… Well, the insect world discriminates a lot… but they don’t have media or social structure of that kind… besides ants, of course; they may actually have a term for ‘liberal-minded.’ …Lousy retinal vision, still.
A classic choice— leading the reader away with the crafty but anthropomorphized dialog, and then sending it home—‘yeah, it’s them moths.’
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I enjoyed the dialogue, and that subtle insertion of of species “mixing.” Well-done!
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A very literal take this week 🙂 – I liked your little nod to racial tensions. Clever.
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A fun take on the prompt. The tête-à-tête compliments the photo.
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i also tried something with dialogues, nice post
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Hilarious! loved it. First thing I thought too, those two having a conversation 🙂
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I didn’t see these moths as climbing up before, but now that’s I’ve read your story, I can’t unsee it. 🙂 Funny stuff.
-David
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