The doorbell jingled; the Christmas fairy shifted on her perch to identify the newcomer.
“Good Christmas, Mabel?” said Joe, flopping down next to the woman nursing a cappuccino.
“Oh usual stuff, kids everywhere, noise, noise, noise.”
She’d spent the day alone, in bed.
“You?”
He sipped his espresso.
“Same old…relatives…turkey…booze.”
He’d shared his Christmas with a whisky bottle. That much was true.
“Was gonna ask if you wanted to come round.”
“Same here. Glad you were sorted though.”
Both nodded.
Ten minutes later Mabel left, Joe ordered another coffee, and the fairy sighed.
You could lead the lonely to water – but hell would freeze over before they’d drink.
A very happy, healthy and prosperous New Year to all Friday Fictioneers. Looking forward to seeing you all again, and probably some new faces too, in 2016. Special thanks to Rochelle, for her patience, fortitude and leadership. I hope the coming year brings you happiness, and as much success as this one, Rochelle. Mine’s a re-run – hope you don’t mind – I’m short on both time and inspiration right now. Here’s hoping that will change for the better in 2016 too! 😉
Oh so lonely indeed…
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Happy New Year, Dale!
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And to you and yours, Sandra!
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I hadn’t seen this before, Sandra, and I think it is terrific.
Painful, but sensitive, a sharp observation of the human condition.
You have clearly been writing at this remarkable level for quite some time.
All the best to you and yours for the coming year.
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Thank you CE, for your comments and for the New Year wishes. Naturally reciprocated. 😉
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New to me too; not a piece one would easily forget – tears to the eyes etc. So true to the lives of some people.
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Thanks for reading Patrick. Happy New Year!
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Dear Sandra,
I loved it then. I love it now.
Thank you for all the magnificent support this past year. I look forward to another year.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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It’s been a pleasure, Rochelle. Happy New Year!
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I feel like I really should pay more attention!
My new word for 2016 is Hopeful!
Thank you Sandra 😉
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Good luck with your new word, Dawn. 🙂 Happy New Year.
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Thanks Sandra, the same to you.
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this is vivid and real — i hope everybody will disintegrate the fog. well-written. thank you!
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Thank you for reading Matthew. Happy New Year!
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Ah, I can feel the fairy’s frustration!
Happy New Year, Sandra. Here’s to a wonderful and blessed year to come!
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And the same to you MissTiffany. Thanks for reading.
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We all try to hide what we really feel don’t we?
Can’t say I blame them.
Well written story.
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Yes, I guess we do. Opening up can sometimes be the hardest thing. Happy New Year!
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Sigh…The lies we hide behind.
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The defences we construct… Happy New Year Joseph!
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Indeed.
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Definitely merits a re-run. Happy New Year
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Thank you Tracey, and a happy New Year to you too. Hope you enjoy your trip to Spain.
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I decided to study in Seville instead of Malaga. I don’t need another beach vacation. I’m off to Baja Mexico for 2 months and then Hawaii. I’m taking retirement out for a spin.
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Loved it last time and same again this time. You capture the loneliness so well. Hope you’re managing to keep dry … Happy New Year.😀
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Hi Dee. Thanks for re-reading. Happy New Year to you too. We are as dry as a bone here! 🙂
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I can feel my guts twisting for both of them. Poor Joe, poor Mabel. Stubbornness can be such a difficult thing.
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Stubbornness and laziness too! Happy New Year Carol!
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Quite sad and oh so true.
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Thank for reading. Happy New Year!
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Some ships only pass in the night… what can a fairy do?
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There’s only so much … Happy New Year Roger!
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Thanks for stopping by!
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And they could have had such a lovely Christmas if only they could see what the fairy saw. Perhaps next year. Happy New Year Sandra.
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Someone needs to go the extra mile or so. Happy New Year, Irene. 🙂
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A sad little story of our times. Touching dialogue, and I like the voice of the fairy.
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Thank you Margaret. Happy New Year!
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Thank you for reading Margaret. Happy New Year!
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I’m sure this is a common situation. too proud to admit to loneliness.
Visit Keith’s Ramblings!
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Thanks for reading Keith. Happy New Year!
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well-written piece. next year will be different. joe’s coming out of the closet. 🙂
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It would be nice if one of them did! Happy New Year!
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Christmas is worst for the lonely.. and the shame, the shame… i wonder how many lonely people are pass each other without really connecting.. so many lost opportunities.
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So true Bjorn. Happy New Year!
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How dreadfully sad – but there’s a kind of shame in admitting you’re lonely.
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It seems so. Thanks for reading Liz, and a Happy New Year!
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You can rerun this one every year if you want. I never get tired of reading the punch line.
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Thank you Russell. 🙂 Happy and humorous New Year!
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Well written Sandra, it makes us wonder what really goes on behind closed doors
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Thanks RG. Happy New Year!
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Great story, Sandra, and hopefully you had a better Christmas than these two. It says a lot about human nature.
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Lovely Christmas, thank you David. And Happy New Year!
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Ah yes … sometime people hiding behind their veils of loneliness can’t see a friend even if they sit there drinking an espresso. Good one Sandra.
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There’s none so blind… Happy New Year!
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Best to you too on the new year!
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It was new to me, Sandra. Well written as usual and very cute with that fairy. Happy New Year to you and yours. 🙂 — Suzanne
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And the same to you Suzanne. Thank you for reading throughout 2015. 🙂
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Ha, so true, and a perfect example of how saving face really saves nothing at all.
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