We form the circle.
Lily abhors contact with Penrose; the first summons can launch her into a crazy spiral of despair, her anguish leaving us spent.
We all harbour a similar aversion to him; I’ve seen the way others avoid him afterwards, hurriedly donning their coats. His lust for the touch of her after-self nauseates us all.
The candles flicker, and a deafening hiss sucks the air from the room, plunging us into darkness.
Someone panics… breaks the circle…
…and Lily is back.
Penrose will rue this day.
Because I suspect she’s here for good.
For him.
And truly pissed.
Inspired by the photo, and a book I’ve just finished (The Possessions by Sara Flannery Murphy) this is my offering for this week’s Friday Fictioneers. Thanks as ever to Rochelle for her gracious hosting of the weekly get-together. I hope all those Fictioneers who were in Irma’s malevolent path earlier this week are safe and well, and that order will soon be restored to their lives.
Beautifully rendered little gothic tale
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Thanks Neil.
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Sure glad that I was not there. Lily sounded very pissed off. Did I say that.
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You did. Thanks for reading.
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Should’ve just left Lily in peace, Penrose is in for a rough time by the sounds of it.
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Summoning is a dangerous practice.
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You never know what or who you will get.
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That has been my experience.
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Very dark and disturbing little tale. Goosebumps!
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Thank you.
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Dear Sandra,
Penrose doesn’t sound like someone to be possessed by. Love the title…made me snort. Glad I’d set my coffee aside.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Waterproof laptop, a must have for every Friday Fictioneer. 🙂 Thanks for reading.
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Excellent. Finding love is difficult enough for the living!
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Thank you!
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That was creepy. I wonder what Lily will do after she’s finished with Penrose.
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I daren’t dwell on it.:)
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Looks like a little karma for Penrose! Great story.
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Thanks Caerlynn.
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Spooky. Penrose sounds like your basic slimy stalker.
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I think so. 🙂
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Penrose is toast (yes, I did that on purpose).
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🙂
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Really interesting as I had never read planchette stories before .Loved your story .
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Thank you Moon.
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Oh, this is good. One shouldn’t mess with things one doesn’t understand…especially when emotions are involved!
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So true. 🙂
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Oops! There’s nothing like a pissed off ghost. Truly loved this, Sandra.
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Thanks Alicia.
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i guess he’s getting what he deserves. 🙂
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That’ll teach him to mess with the “beyond”. Bring it on, Lily!
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Oh dear, Lily is not happy! Nice one.
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Thanks Keith.
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He sounds repulsive – just that nod that he has a lust for the long dead Lily. Horrible. Beautifully told, Sandra. Was the book good?
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It was interesting. Could have been told in less, but maybe that’s the Friday Fictioneer in me 🙂
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Ha! Not a bad habit to get into 🙂
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Sounds sinister@
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Very.
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Reminds me of those seance episodes of Fantasy Island. Quite creepy, but well done!
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Thanks for reading Miles.
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What’s Lily gonna do? Will she drag him to wherever it is she is?
If so, that gives new meaning to the expression that what he did is to die for.
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Like what you did there. 🙂
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Nice one. I suspect he was very possessive of Lily in life and she has every right to be mad that he still wants to possess her after death.
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That’s just about it. And he’ll live or die to regret it.
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This was… disturbing – ly good! Penrose should go off… it does not bode well for him to stayé
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Thanks for reading Dale. 🙂
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Woooaaah! That’s a spooky one. Is there an after story too?
A very well told tale Sandra.
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Thanks Natasha. 🙂
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Very creepy tale but very ably written as is expected from you Sandra..
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Thank you, Neel. 🙂
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Ghost stories from bread! What an imagination! 🙂
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You should see what I write about the marmalade… 😦
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🙂
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Penrose did make my skin crawl 😦
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Not a nice man. 🙂
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Penrose should have let Lily lie. You paint Penrose as a particularly unpleasant character, suitably lecherous. I hope he manages to enjoy getting what he wish for.
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I think he might live the rest of his life regretting it. Thanks for reading Sarah Ann.
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Goosebumps! it was a thrill to read this piece. Super pick for the prompt.
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Many thanks.
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He might be pleased getting her to appear but looks like she is about to strike a happy medium.
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Creepy good!
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Very spooky. Well done!
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I liked the line about “lusting for the touch of her after-self.” I chuckled aloud.
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Gosh this was terrific. Vengeful spirit i hope he gets what’s coming to him
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Great, effective tale. He should leave well alone but somehow I don’t think he can see that. Sorry for the late comment, been somewhat incommunicado.
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