We’d been too busy to notice, we said later, even though we crossed the village green every day.
Some days it had faced south, sometimes east, occasionally west.
But we only remembered that when someone said “Hey, shouldn’t that thing have melted by now?”
That morning, when it turned northwards, a group of us approached for a closer look. We prodded it; solid ice, despite the first benevolent spring breezes stirring the trees.
“Let’s get the snow-plough,” said one neighbour. But by the time we returned, the snowman had vanished.
And so had every child who lived in our village.
Hardly a literary masterpiece, but when there’s a story to be told, sometimes there’s not enough words left for the ‘literary’ touches. 🙂 Thanks to Rochelle for all her work on Friday Fictioneers.
Hmm, a Pied Piper with a difference.
This has a sort of James Herberty feel to it, very creepy.
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Thanks, CE. 🙂
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Yes, i agree, very creepy, and ominous too.
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Thanks for reading, Neil.
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Dear Sandra,
A bit of a paranormal feel to this one. You leave me scratching my head and wanting to know more. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle. 🙂
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Sandra, and we thought we could trust Frosty the Snowman…Some would say that this warrants caution, suspicion, withdrawal into your cave but even when those we trust let us down or prove to be quite evil, that we can’t tar everyone with the same brush. We still need to see the good in humanity.
Here in Australia, we’re had a huge shock this week when Cardinal George Pell was convicted of child sexual assault or similar. Although I’m not Catholic, it still shocks me. It’s disgusting.
Best wishes,
Rowena
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Thanks for reading, Rowena. Trust no-one, I’m beginning to believe.
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It is looking that way, but I still can’t help myself.
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A fairytale in the making; where did all the children go?
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Iceland. 🙂
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Nice answer. The land of fire & ice!
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Terrifying story!
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Thanks for reading, Josh.
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Gosh! They shouldn’t have let the snowman know what they were planning to do.
He probably heard and went away with the kids?
Interesting story.
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Thanks, Anita.
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Snowmen aren’t the innocent fun they appear, especially if they refuse to melt!
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Nothing worse than a snowman outstaying his welcome.
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I’ve never trusted snowmen since one made off with a carrot and three bits of coal I’d loaned him..
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That’s snowmen for you.
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Mystery in making..
Nice read
Memories
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Scary stuff!
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Thanks for reading, Liz.
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Ooh – deliciously creepy story, Sandra. Loved it.
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Thanks for reading, Susan.
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The Pied Piper in a mash-up with Frosty the Snowman. Creepy 🙂
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Thanks, Linda.
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That is some scary stuff, Miss Sandra!!
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So’s that block of ice outside your door, Dale. Who knows what’s lurking there?
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Hahaha! I know, right?
Gives Zeke extra exercise jumping up 😂
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Whatever it is, it has a mind of its own. This thing is capturing humans and freezing them into ice. How did it come to this town?
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Fell from the sky, I think. Thanks for reading.
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Yikes, the Pied Snowman of New Mexico!
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That’s about right. 🙂
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Well I didn’t expect that twist, what a sinister tale!! Great stuff.
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Thanks for reading.
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i like how you held back, on what the thing was, that was facing North, South etc. Weird, to hear it is a snowman, but you could brush it off as a childs prank. Then he disappears. Normally when a snowman disappears in warmer weather, no one blinks an eye. But when he takes your children…
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I’ve always found snowmen slightly disturbing. Thanks for reading
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Lovely build-up and great twist at the end.
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Thank you, Penny.
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A ‘chilling’ tale!
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Cool!
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I wonder what happens to the children when the snowman melts and the sirens song is lost? hmm Very nice, Sandra.
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Well, I think the essence of the child manifests itself in another new snowman, lures others, and in this way all the children of this world find their way to another planet….
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A wicked Frosty tale on such a chilly morning. Good write.
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Thanks Jelli.
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as spring beckons, the snowman couldn’t stand the heat and takes the children with him. what a cold-hearted guy.
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Comes with the territory, I guess 🙂
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So creepy!
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Thanks for reading!
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Oh, the weather outside is frightful…
Randy
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You should write a song about that…
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There is a serious ice problem in our cities. But this was brilliant, chilling and creepy all at the same time. And yes the Pied Piper did spring to mind.
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A very cold Pied Piper. Thanks for visiting.
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Dark, cold – the Pied Piper of snowmen. Wonderfully done, Sandra
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Thanks, Lynn. Hope all is well.
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My pleasure Sandra. Hope all’s well with you too
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A creepy, interesting take!
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Thanks, Kelley.
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Eeek, that last line is a killer. Wonderfully creepy, Sandra.
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Many thanks 🙂
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A surprising twist. I share your suspicion of snowmen, although I can’t say i’ve seen very many. However I’ve seen some sand castles that would scare your socks off.
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I’ve seen a few sand dragons that make me uneasy. Thanks for reading, Margaret.
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Creepy… Did all the kids follow it on their own or were they forced to come along.
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I like to think they went of their own volition. 🙂
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Really creepy. I feel there is a moral to this story somehow. Maybe parents should spend more time with their kids, so that they don’t follow the ‘snowmen’ in real life. Something like that.
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