“They’re Geminoids”, he said, pointing at the silver striations in the clear December skies.
“They look like wishes,” I said.
He frowned at me. “Wishes?”
“Christmas wishes,” I declared, for at that stage of my life, and indeed at that time of year, there was really only one kind of wish.
My father looked briefly disappointed and, hand-in-hand, we scrunched across frosty tufts of grass back to the house.
“Well aren’t they?” I was insistent, since in those days questions were my bread-and-butter in the absence of an ability to secure any other reciprocal form of dialogue with the adults in my life.
“You’ll learn in time that there are other things in life to yearn for.”
Tonight would not be a good time to ask what “yearn” meant. I sensed it. Just as I always sensed, at some level, that my father interacted on a plane so remote as to make any meaningful contact an infrequent occurrence. Unlike my mother, who could descend into child-speak with consummate ease, my father had only one level of discourse available.
Another bright burst of light streaked above us.
My mother was waiting at the kitchen door.
“Did you see the wishes, Mummy?”
She drew me indoors.
“I’ve told her what they are,” my father snapped, retiring to his study.
“They’re not wishes,” she said, unbuttoning my coat. “They’re kisses.”
“Kisses from who?”
“Why from angels of course.”
I stared at her.
They weren’t.
Even I knew that.
I would become my father’s child.
I’m always happy, subject to my ever elusive muse, to support new ‘writing co-operatives’ so this is submitted for the newly launched 250 word Min Min Weekly Prompt. This week’s prompt is ‘Lights in the Sky’. To read other stories, click on this link.
You create a mood and atmosphere so eloquently, Sandra. I hope she keeps a little of her mother and doesn’t completely become her father 🙂
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I hope so too Dale. Why don’t you pop over to Min Min? There are a few familiar faces. I actually found 250 word limit quite … liberating, I guess. Not as challenging as FF , but liberating.
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Hmmm… I might do that! I get it. 150 words extra you can add so much depth (and still not be able to ramble on…)
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Hope to see you here, Dale!
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How lovely of you to say, Jenne!
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Our parents tell us stories to keep us stilled. She is starting to stir. Lovely story, Sandra, as always
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Thanks Neil. It makes a change to have more words to play with.
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I have missed your writing so much, Sandra, and this is as exquisite as ever, layers of nuance, beautifully expressed.
Thank you for enriching our new challenge.
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Thank you for bringing it to my attention. I’ve been confined to a chair for the last three days with vertigo, so it was good to have something to divert me away from the whirling pits I normally associate with my indulgences at an earlier age. 🙂
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Great to have you here, Sandra, and what an exquisite piece of childhood observation and thought, especially ‘Tonight would not be a good time to ask what “yearn” meant. I sensed it. Just as I always sensed, at some level, that my father interacted on a plane so remote as to make any meaningful contact an infrequent occurrence. ‘
And many thanks for inviting your followers to join, 🙂
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My pleasure Doug. And thank you for reading and commenting.
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I really liked this story. Explains a lot about the subject even without direct words.
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Thanks very much for reading.
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“…questions were my bread-and-butter in the absence of an ability to secure any other reciprocal form of dialogue with the adults in my life.”
excellent insight into the mind of the people we used to be before being expelled from a world common to us all.
As with other refugees in other times and different places, some of us hold onto the old language (jealously guarded, of course, lest un-welcome attention is brought to bear) and pass on tales of the before time.
enjoyable story
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I read somewhere that “there are a lot of things in this world waiting for us to develop the senses to notice them”. I prefer to think of it as ‘regaining’ those faculties. 🙂 Thank you for reading and commenting.
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What a great pleasure to read your work again, Sandra. You write the child’s voice and dilemma so convincingly that it took me bacl and reminded me of instances from my own childhood. I love ‘we scrunched across frosty tufts of grass’. I can hear it and feel the cold.
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Thanks for reading Jenne. I missed your work on Fri Fic. But I see you’ve been honing your craft. 🙂
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