Fact, Fiction and Fantasy – Min Min Weekly Prompt – January 2023

“They’re Geminoids”, he said, pointing at the silver striations in the clear December skies.

“They look like wishes,” I said. 

He frowned at me.  “Wishes?”

“Christmas wishes,” I declared, for at that stage of my life, and indeed at that time of year, there was really only one kind of wish.

My father looked briefly disappointed and, hand-in-hand, we scrunched across frosty tufts of grass back to the house.

“Well aren’t they?”  I was insistent, since in those days questions were my bread-and-butter in the absence of an ability to secure any other reciprocal form of dialogue with the adults in my life.

“You’ll learn in time that there are other things in life to yearn for.”

Tonight would not be a good time to ask what “yearn” meant.  I sensed it.  Just as I always sensed, at some level, that my father interacted on a plane so remote as to make any meaningful contact an infrequent occurrence.  Unlike my mother, who could descend into child-speak with consummate ease, my father had only one level of discourse available.

Another bright burst of light streaked above us. 

My mother was waiting at the kitchen door.

“Did you see the wishes, Mummy?”

She drew me indoors.

“I’ve told her what they are,” my father snapped, retiring to his study.

“They’re not wishes,” she said, unbuttoning my coat.  “They’re kisses.”

“Kisses from who?”

“Why from angels of course.”

I stared at her.

They weren’t.

Even I knew that. 

I would become my father’s child.

I’m always happy, subject to my ever elusive muse, to support new ‘writing co-operatives’ so this is submitted for the newly launched 250 word Min Min Weekly Prompt. This week’s prompt is ‘Lights in the Sky’. To read other stories, click on this link.

About Sandra

I used to cruise the French waterways with my husband four or five months a year, and wrote fiction and poetry. Now I live on the beautiful Dorset coast, enjoying the luxury of being able to have a cat, cultivating an extensive garden and getting involved in the community. I still write fiction, but only when the spirit moves me - which isn't as often as before. I love animals, F1 motor racing, French bread and my husband, though not necessarily in that order.
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17 Responses to Fact, Fiction and Fantasy – Min Min Weekly Prompt – January 2023

  1. Dale says:

    You create a mood and atmosphere so eloquently, Sandra. I hope she keeps a little of her mother and doesn’t completely become her father 🙂

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  2. neilmacdon says:

    Our parents tell us stories to keep us stilled. She is starting to stir. Lovely story, Sandra, as always

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  3. ceayr says:

    I have missed your writing so much, Sandra, and this is as exquisite as ever, layers of nuance, beautifully expressed.

    Thank you for enriching our new challenge.

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    • Sandra says:

      Thank you for bringing it to my attention. I’ve been confined to a chair for the last three days with vertigo, so it was good to have something to divert me away from the whirling pits I normally associate with my indulgences at an earlier age. 🙂

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  4. Great to have you here, Sandra, and what an exquisite piece of childhood observation and thought, especially ‘Tonight would not be a good time to ask what “yearn” meant. I sensed it. Just as I always sensed, at some level, that my father interacted on a plane so remote as to make any meaningful contact an infrequent occurrence. ‘
    And many thanks for inviting your followers to join, 🙂

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  5. Forestwood says:

    I really liked this story. Explains a lot about the subject even without direct words.

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  6. clark says:

    “…questions were my bread-and-butter in the absence of an ability to secure any other reciprocal form of dialogue with the adults in my life.

    excellent insight into the mind of the people we used to be before being expelled from a world common to us all.
    As with other refugees in other times and different places, some of us hold onto the old language (jealously guarded, of course, lest un-welcome attention is brought to bear) and pass on tales of the before time.

    enjoyable story

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    • Sandra says:

      I read somewhere that “there are a lot of things in this world waiting for us to develop the senses to notice them”. I prefer to think of it as ‘regaining’ those faculties. 🙂 Thank you for reading and commenting.

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  7. jenne49 says:

    What a great pleasure to read your work again, Sandra. You write the child’s voice and dilemma so convincingly that it took me bacl and reminded me of instances from my own childhood. I love ‘we scrunched across frosty tufts of grass’. I can hear it and feel the cold.

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