The plan was
not to have a plan.
Wally’s idea, that.
As a concept, this suggests the virtues of extemporisation are paramount to the success of an operation.
But this was not, if it ever has been, the case that day.
What we did know was the bank was staffed by only one cashier during the lunch period, a 55 year old woman with a hearing-aid probably dispensed in the late seventies, and a pronounced nervous tic under her right eye.
Wally, who’s a stranger not only to reality, but coincidentally to the truth, had told us she flirted with him whenever he went to draw out money and er… ‘case the joint’ as he called it. This was Ashton-in-Makerfield, you understand. In Ashton-in-Makerfield joints don’t get cased, they get roasted with two veg and a ton-and-a-half of potatoes. Not that most people in Ashton-in-Makerfield ever saw a joint of that nature, probably being more familiar with the ones smoked furtively under the canal viaduct on a Friday night.
I digress.
I often do.
And now I have the time for it.
Because what we didn’t know was that the bank vaults automatically lock during the lunch period. And, to compound our ignorance, that any dialogue over 70 decibels automatically alerts the police.
Wally was right about the cashier though. She did fancy him.
She visits him regularly.
And she brought a cake with a file inside.
We need a plan now.
Not one of Wally’s though.
Some other plan.
To commemorate Burns Night, this week’s Six Crooked Highways Min Min challenge relates to Rabbie Burns’ poem “Of Mice and Men”. And Wally. If you want to see what this 250 word weekly challenge is all about, click on the link above. If you want to enter or read other entries click here.
Beautifully constructed and hilarious, especially the digressions. ‘Not that most people in Ashton-in-Makerfield ever saw a joint of that nature, probably being more familiar with the ones smoked furtively under the canal viaduct on a Friday night.’ That’s a gem.
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Doug. And going to the trouble of setting this up.
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Your contribution is a great example of my motives in starting Min Min. Enjoy.
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Oh, what larks!!
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Hope jail is just as much of a lark. 🙂 Thanks for reading, Sue.
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😊😊😊😊
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Utterly delightful!
I feel that I have to acquire a whole new supply of chapeaux!
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Thanks for reading and commenting CE. I’m enjoying the liberating effect of those extra 150 words. 🙂
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Simply delightful Sandra, the cake with a file really made me chuckle!
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I used to read my brother’s comics. I know about these things. 🙂
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That, Sandra, is quite simply magnificent. A real wee gem of a story. Rabbie would have been proud of you.
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Thanks for reading and commenting Jenne. Enjoy your celebrations!
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Fun story, well written. I love a satisfyingly twisty ending.
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What a fun story on a couple of levels.
The tale of the deluded leading the willfully blind is quite engaging, as is your (whatever the term for the layout/presentation of a story). Which is, for me, the second level of ‘I’m glad I stopped by to read’.
The easy-half of why I participate in bloghops it to read other writers engaged in a common challenge, e.. Doug’s M+M ‘hop.
My participation makes possible the opportunity, with certain stories, to think (or, if reading in private) say aloud, ‘Damn! How’d she/he do that?’
While there are some stories that warrant re-reading for enjoyment, I re-visit certain stories just to figure out how it was done. Setting the scene. Building the action. Surprising the Reader.
Like I said, fun.
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Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate your comments.
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Love is found is the strangest places, with the oddest people, as you’ve masterfully relayed here. Gives one hope, and a hearty belly laugh!
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Many thanks for reading and commenting.
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