The prompt for this week’s 5 Sentence Fiction challenge was ‘Coincidence’ http://lilliemcferrin.blogspot.co.uk/p/five-sentence-fiction.html
Alter Ego
Her pale fingers hover over the keys of her laptop, and she gazes in shock at the website page displayed on the screen before her.
The story she has just read is one of her own, yet displayed for the entire world to see under a stranger’s name, and when she flicks through the site she sees more of her work, some of which has generated comment and discussions on its quality and originality.
Outrage at this blatant act of plagiarism rises like bile within her; what kind of a person would steal the ideas of others, and reproduce them verbatim under their own name without even attempting to disguise them as their own?
Once again, she feels that familiar yawning chasm of despair lurking only a few paces away, that spiralling bitterness at the way she’s always been someone’s victim, forever bearing the brunt of someone’s evil, vindictiveness and cruelty.
She slams the lid of the laptop down, staring at her reflection in the mirror opposite her desk, and as she drops her head in her hands, sobbing loudly, the woman in the mirror smiles, opens her laptop and resumes writing, staring contemptuously at the pathetic figure before her.
Sandra,
I like the way you think. Who’s in the mirror and which is the reflection?
Aloha,
Doug
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Thanks for commenting Doug. This one came to me during a restless night so I thought I’d get it out right away this morning. I think the woman in the mirror is winning the struggle 🙂
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Like this one conjures up a few thoughts – alter ego perhaps, or maybe lack on confidence
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Thanks for commenting Sue. That’s another way of looking at it. Good thinking.
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Spooky – maybe she’s gone all schizoid from shock – are we seeing her refection, or is she? Maybe it’s about alternative reactions and she knows she should roll with the punches instead of breaking down. I like the ambiguity of this and the double meaning in the the title.
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Thanks for commenting Sheila. One of the things I like about these prompt challenge exercises is that I don’t need to have any answers. I only need to set the scene and then I’m as free as everyone else to ascribe meaning to it. 🙂 So liberating just to go with the flow, not having an editor breathing down my neck demanding ‘what does it mean …?’
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nicely put Sandra. I liked how you built to the twist in the story!
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Thanks Jo-Anne, glad you enjoyed it.
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Loved that!
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Thanks for dropping by Madison. Glad you liked it.
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Wonderful!! Leaves us wondering who is who, not only in your story, but in our own creative lives!
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Thanks Ruth, glad you enjoyed it.
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Absolutely wonderful! Never saw that ending, but it could not have been more perfect. So good 🙂
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Thanks for dropping by Lillie, and for commenting.
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Oh my, this actually gave me a shiver at the end, like maybe it’s her alter ego, a split personality. Well done!
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Thanks for commenting Judee, appreciate it.
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sandra that was frightening; i knew exactly where it was going but had no desire to skip a single word in order to get there
randomly clicked on this from your ‘just sayin” page……..i feel i must risk another…
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Feel free! Thanks for commenting Sacha.
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