Bird Brain (Trifextra Week 51, January 2013)

The Trifecta Weekend Challenge is to create a piece of 33 words from one of three photo prompts. 

This is more difficult than you’d think.

I told my girl we’d meet at eight,

“Where at?” she asked – “the Empire State?”

Been waiting over  half an hour –

I’ll bet she’s at the Freedom Tower.

Duh! … no sense of direction

Photo credit: ZeroOne / Foter.com / CC BY-SA

About Sandra

I cruise the French waterways with my husband four or five months a year, and write fiction and poetry. I love animals, F1 motor racing, French bread and my husband, though not necessarily in that order.
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42 Responses to Bird Brain (Trifextra Week 51, January 2013)

  1. joetwo says:

    Ha! Lost! Very funny! 🙂

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  2. Sandra says:

    Sounds like something I would do! 😐

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  3. writelindy says:

    Hilarious. I love it Sandra.

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  4. yerpirate says:

    REALLY fun! And different, too..

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  5. jwilliams057 says:

    Very cute.

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  6. steph says:

    Cute – love that wacky sense of direction.

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  7. Yeah, this made grin. Nicely played.

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  8. The dating life is for the birds, I suppose! 🙂 Well done, Sandra.

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  9. jannatwrites says:

    That would be me…I’d wonder which tall building 🙂

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  10. deanabo says:

    Awe.. A bird in love. cute!

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  11. Rachael says:

    Funny and lyrical! love the “duh”!

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    • Sandra says:

      I didn’t know whether to use ‘duh’ or ‘doh’ but when I googled it I found there is a difference, and ‘duh’ is more derogatory. Didn’t know that. 😦

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  12. muZer says:

    Hehe.. Directions & girls of all kinds- somehow never ends well! 🙂 Nicely done.

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  13. Judee says:

    Amazing, even with 33 words, you get it right! 🙂

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  14. DeeDee says:

    Poor guy! Still waiting for his girl?

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  15. Misky says:

    LOL! Excellent! 😀

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  16. Draug419 says:

    lmao I take it she’s no homing pigeon :3

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  17. lol. nice rhyme to it as well.

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  18. atrm61 says:

    Ha!ha!Sounds so much like me!Well,if he knew his girl has no sense of direction,shouldn’t he have picked her up for their date-dumb male!lol!Loved this:-)

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  19. Tina says:

    This was so cute, with a little romance thrown in. Loved it!

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  20. zennjennc says:

    I bet he wasn’t clear enough in the first place 😉

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  21. She needs a GPS. First anniversary gift. 🙂

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