What goes around… (Trifecta 33 Word Challenge)

Posted on August 3, 2013 by Sandra

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Where?

There, on the tunnel wall…

There’s nothing there.

Can’t you see… those people…

You’re crazy…look the train’s coming.  Oh Christ!

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Did you see her jump, sir?

I think they did, officer.

Who?

About Sandra

I used to cruise the French waterways with my husband four or five months a year, and wrote fiction and poetry. Now I live on the beautiful Dorset coast, enjoying the luxury of being able to have a cat, cultivating an extensive garden and getting involved in the community. I still write fiction, but only when the spirit moves me - which isn't as often as before. I love animals, F1 motor racing, French bread and my husband, though not necessarily in that order.
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16 Responses to What goes around… (Trifecta 33 Word Challenge)

  1. howanxious says:
    August 3, 2013 at 2:57 pm

    Whoop.. that is brilliant! 🙂

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  2. Jo-Anne Teal (@jtvancouver) says:
    August 3, 2013 at 3:43 pm

    Sandra – I couldn’t say it any better than the comment above: brilliant. :)))

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  3. chloeaevm says:
    August 3, 2013 at 4:33 pm

    Chilling. In a good way.

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  4. EagleAye says:
    August 3, 2013 at 8:23 pm

    Ooh, I like this. The shadows given life. This is a great idea.

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  5. Linda Vernon says:
    August 4, 2013 at 3:25 am

    Oh a neat little psychological thriller in 33 words! Only you could do that Sandra!

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  6. jannatwrites says:
    August 4, 2013 at 2:28 pm

    Uh-oh…I see psychiatric observation in his future.

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  7. trifectawriting says:
    August 4, 2013 at 11:01 pm

    Ooo that’s eerie. Very good.

    Thank you for linking up!

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  8. Let's CUT the Crap! says:
    August 4, 2013 at 11:29 pm

    A mystery to be solved. I like that.

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  9. Draug419 says:
    August 5, 2013 at 12:26 am

    Hey, I need to sleep tonight okay…
    Creepy and good.

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  10. barbara says:
    August 5, 2013 at 3:26 am

    it would be eerie to be the only one to see them . . . 🙂

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  11. Joe Owens says:
    August 5, 2013 at 6:50 pm

    Shadows see everything, but they are not considered reliable witnesses. Nice one Sandra.

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