What goes around… (Trifecta 33 Word Challenge)

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There, on the tunnel wall…

There’s nothing there.

Can’t you see… those people…

You’re crazy…look the train’s coming.  Oh Christ!


Did you see her jump, sir?

I think they did, officer.


About Sandra

I used to cruise the French waterways with my husband four or five months a year, and wrote fiction and poetry. Now I live on the beautiful Dorset coast, enjoying the luxury of being able to have a cat, cultivating an extensive garden and getting involved in the community. I still write fiction, but only when the spirit moves me - which isn't as often as before. I love animals, F1 motor racing, French bread and my husband, though not necessarily in that order.
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16 Responses to What goes around… (Trifecta 33 Word Challenge)

  1. howanxious says:

    Whoop.. that is brilliant! 🙂


  2. Sandra – I couldn’t say it any better than the comment above: brilliant. :)))


  3. chloeaevm says:

    Chilling. In a good way.


  4. EagleAye says:

    Ooh, I like this. The shadows given life. This is a great idea.


  5. Linda Vernon says:

    Oh a neat little psychological thriller in 33 words! Only you could do that Sandra!


  6. jannatwrites says:

    Uh-oh…I see psychiatric observation in his future.


  7. Ooo that’s eerie. Very good.

    Thank you for linking up!


  8. A mystery to be solved. I like that.


  9. Draug419 says:

    Hey, I need to sleep tonight okay…
    Creepy and good.


  10. barbara says:

    it would be eerie to be the only one to see them . . . 🙂


  11. Joe Owens says:

    Shadows see everything, but they are not considered reliable witnesses. Nice one Sandra.


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